First of all I would like to say - I am not a good writer like Kira is ! So don't have too many expectations.
Second [yeah, I'm kinda a nerd or geek - I put my words in points :P] - I just wrote this poem out of feelings for a special friend - the feeling that I wouldn't be a special friend until I stick with them during the bad times too. Not good really, I just want criticism - positive or negetive. :) Oh, and a title too.
Love,
Dawn <3
Second [yeah, I'm kinda a nerd or geek - I put my words in points :P] - I just wrote this poem out of feelings for a special friend - the feeling that I wouldn't be a special friend until I stick with them during the bad times too. Not good really, I just want criticism - positive or negetive. :) Oh, and a title too.
Love,
Dawn <3
If I'm your special friend,
What am I supposed to do?
Laugh and roam like everyone else?
Or am I supposed to listen too?
Listen to you whims and woes,
Whenever you feel blue?
Or do I just remain with you during the good times,
Just giving hi-fives to you ?
I may be stupid,
I may be dumb.
But I'm here for you to vent out,
Whenever you feel numb.
Days are not the same forever,
They have their own turns and ways,
But I can stick with you through it all,
Even though how much you try and push me away.
I had nothing much to say.
To make you smile, I can even try singing!
And trust me, while proving to be your 'special' friend -
That is only the beginning!
What am I supposed to do?
Laugh and roam like everyone else?
Or am I supposed to listen too?
Listen to you whims and woes,
Whenever you feel blue?
Or do I just remain with you during the good times,
Just giving hi-fives to you ?
I may be stupid,
I may be dumb.
But I'm here for you to vent out,
Whenever you feel numb.
Days are not the same forever,
They have their own turns and ways,
But I can stick with you through it all,
Even though how much you try and push me away.
I had nothing much to say.
To make you smile, I can even try singing!
And trust me, while proving to be your 'special' friend -
That is only the beginning!